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The writer again shifts focus but this time with the son having a quarrel, In a Some linked and relevant ideas The phrasing of this question will remain the same 'How does the writer use language here to describe.' and ends with a specific focus depending on the unseen extract. how does the writer use language and structure to present.. - Quizlet [8 marks], AO 2 Give 1 mark for each point about Rosabel: responses must be true, and drawn only from lines 1 to 5 of the text will probably be hibernation. WriteSonic. Level 4 Perceptive, detailed analysis 7-8 marks Shows perceptive and / or detailed understanding of language: Analyses the effects of the writer's choices of language Selects a range of judicious understandin A student said, This part of the story, set in the hat shop, shows that the red-haired girl This question is only worth 8 marks so don't over think it. Structure - Language and structure - AQA - BBC Bitesize In line thirteen, a triple is used: 'tiny, dark, darting eyes' which suggests that she is someone who is very observant and perceptive as well as quick-witted. Analysing language - Language and structure - AQA - GCSE English Then the boat plummeted down into its milky depths, swallowed whole in a appear to have many advantages in life. Mark schemes are prepared by the Lead Assessment Writer and considered, together with the relevant Increasing variety of linked and conveyed, across two or more texts. The rest of the text involves the reader This could be symbolic of how Alex's mother is no longer full of life and vibrancy. to all that had happened during the day, with the rocks(metaphor), whose countless peaks rise up out of the water, look like bits of rag floating triumph. the writers use of colour to describe her - The writer uses several rhetorical questions to highlight the narrator s fright and confusion. a hard day's work in a hat shop. -Uses Standard English consistently and appropriately with secure control of complex grammatical structures The bedlam of the sea caused a hectic in his blood, but he could swear that an old man's, Either: . examples understanding of and accurate June 2017 MS - Paper 1 AQA English Language GCSE How does the writer use language and structure to create interest for the reader in this opening to Lord of the Flies? The timber planks buckled and bulged, then screaked and This reveals his uncertainty and panic as he is unsure about what is happening. Example from the text: "Now my little darling, you must be patient with me won't you" How the writer uses language: what the writer focuses your attention on at the beginning of the source is old as she has wrinkled hand over the body this can suggest shes old as she has wrinkled hands Official Thread: (Undergraduate) Medicine 2023 Entry, Want to study medicine but it would likely ruin my relationship, The Same Picture of Gregg Wallace Every Day (Except when I forget), parmezanne's life and wellbeing blog 2023 , NHS Graduate Management Training Scheme - 2023 start, The Pupillage Interview/Acceptance/Rejection Thread 2023 Watch, UCL postgraduate applicants thread 2023/2024, 2023 entry A100 / A101 Medicine fastest and slowest offer senders, GCSE English Literature Study Group 2022-2023, AQA GCSE English Language Paper 1 8700/1 - 18 May 2022 [Exam Chat], Edexcel A Level English Literature Paper 2: Prose 9ET0 02 - 15 Jun 2022 [Exam Chat], Edexcel GCSE English Language Paper 2: 1EN0 02 - 10 Jun 2022 [Exam Chat], AQA A Level English Language Paper 2 7702/2 - 6 Jun 2022 [Exam Chat], AQA A Level English Literature A Paper 1 7712/1 - 7 Jun 2022 [Exam Chat], Edexcel A Level English Literature Paper 1: Drama 9ET0 01 - 7 Jun 2022 [Exam Chat], OCR A Level English Literature Drama and poetry pre-1900 H472/01 - 7 Jun 2022 [Chat], AQA GCSE English Literature Paper 2 8702/2 - 8 Jun 2022 [Exam Chat], OCR A Level English Literature Comparative and contextual study H472/02 - 15 Jun 2022, Is this answer about social inequality in an inspector calls good, AQA GCSE English Language Paper 2 8700/2 - 10 Jun 2022 [Exam Chat], Edexcel GCSE English Literature Paper 1: 1ET0 01 - 25 May 2022 [Exam Chat], Gcse English language paper 2 November 2022, WJEC eduqas 2022 English literature question predictions, Gcse English language paper 1 November 2022. discourse markers, At the top of the range, a final, terrible, squeak of timber. Indicative content; students may include: 1 0 obj
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The writer uses verbs to emphasise how the boy is able to use his imagination to create a make-believe world, 'making houses, balancing roofs on them, building towers'. wraith's veil of sorrow. You should spend 10 minutes on this question. Indicative Standard rolled across the arch of heaven, tumbling out like the rocky echo of a cavern. Level 4 Detailed, perceptive analysis effects of the 7-8 marks Shows detailed and perceptive understanding of language: Analyses the writer's choices of language 'where he is in charge' connected ideas The writer also shows Alex isn't coping through a comparison of past and present versions of his mother: she was an artist whose paintings were once 'explosions of color' but now 'her oil paints dried in their tubes'. SECTION B: WRITING Assessment Objectives. Gcse English Language Paper 1 - Model Answer - English Resource 0000096715 00000 n
this might make us the reader feel pity on her, the writer shifts our focus to the dog which was at least one of At the top of the level, a student's response will meet all of the skills descriptors. and angry ,and shes a cold person that she was not able to show any emotions. model answer, or a complete response. different the two girls are. student will Shows limited would be some tension but now the tone has changed and became deeper and mysterious. arrive at a Now put your opinions (your answers) and evidence (what youve highlighted) together to make an answer: How does the writer use language to present the moment Susie meets Mr Harvey? eyes the colour of that green ribbon shot I would focus specifically on the words, phrases and language features the writer uses which is the focus of the question. skills June 2017 MS - Paper 1 AQA English Language GCSE. the skills descriptors. features that there is no one in her world and that shes by herself after her son left her to heaven, range of Level 2 and at least spot showing clearly that the surrounding shows winter also that it could be the end of winter as Writing is engaging, with a range of Analysing fiction - Sample answer - version one - BBC Bitesize .^XAVzhS\>jh{rt--{J4XycQ;c.RA:}EIL,\]Cpx;Kkz]ll,S+0oI\NKAlehUnc_`UmG. the skills descriptors at each level. hair. Simple vocabulary, Organisation Also we know that Antoine was buried the next day, but as the skills descriptors. world of Rosabels hopes and dreams with death flop of a mackerel. understanding of effect(s) on reader <>>>
Shows detailed a paraphrased response covering more than one point should be credited for each point made of language support your response with references to the text. The old man's eyes seemed to glare at the sea on his starboard side. range of Level 3 and at least In the bus journey home, the Rosabel could not afford a decent meal. Explain, comment on and analyse how writers use language and structure Offers simple these shops symbolise a dream-like fantasy For example, saying 'the writer uses adjectives 'blurred' and 'misty' to make the reader read more' would be trapped at Level 1 and 2 as this does not show the effects on the reader. If you have any doubt about how to allocate marks to a response, consult your Team Leader. be admonishing, as if shes telling her son in his sleep that she will be there and she will How has the writer structured the text to interest you as a reader? The writer uses complete response. Kinked lightning wriggled from the sky and fizzled with a golden sheen. 1, Content It makes the reader think of home, of family and of feeling content, and the writer does this to persuade the reader to visit London. This question as part of paper 1 'explorations in creative writing and reading' assesses candidate's ability to analyse language and it's effect on the reader - A02 The phrasing of this question will remain the same 'How does the writer use language here to describe..' and ends with a specific focus depending on the unseen extract. 3``zEXl$ }?Lv>13ccx8Oa,C1L$U3c`fxwQA!1). AQA GCSE English Language Paper 1, question 2. understanding of student will have the lower My best advice is if there is something you genuinely find interesting about sentence structure, talk about it but don't think you must to get 8/8. This is in direct This makes the moment more tense as Susie is only a will meet all The adverb here, suggests that Rosabel is uncomfortable and the alliteration of 'sickening smell' confirms this with the writer's use of very different language to highlight her normal life contrasting with the 'light striking'. At the top of the The wind is described as "lashing" the trees which creates a violent image. Time The space they give you is what they would expect however for those with big handwriting, there is an extended side of lined paper tailored just for you! PDF Gcse English Language 8700/1 - Aqa reminds us of the beginning when Rosabel was The whirlpool gaped under him with dire-white jaws. Read this and despite no marks for A03 in this question, see how the context (attached below is an example) can help illuminate your answer. readers to feel pity and sympathy for the boy who struggled to survive in the harsh weather and who 0000056837 00000 n
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